{"id":6138,"date":"2014-04-28T08:02:10","date_gmt":"2014-04-28T07:02:10","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/etbscreenwriting.com\/\/?p=6138"},"modified":"2014-04-28T08:02:10","modified_gmt":"2014-04-28T07:02:10","slug":"aronofskys-noah-adaptation-challenges","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/etbscreenwriting.com\/aronofskys-noah-adaptation-challenges\/","title":{"rendered":"Aronofsky\u2019s Noah & Adaptation Challenges"},"content":{"rendered":"

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Darren Aronofsky\u2019s film, Noah<\/em>, has caused controversy and consternation across the religious spectrum. Some professed atheists are none too pleased, either.\u00a0 Yet, the film racked up impressive box office numbers and has scored many positive reviews in both the secular and religious press.<\/p>\n

Those who complain about the film criticize Aronofsky\u2019s visual style, the mass killings of flood victims, Aronofsky\u2019s straying from specific elements in the scriptural text, and adding creative elements not present in the original Bible story.<\/p>\n

Whether you liked the film or not, Noah<\/em> is a great look at the adaptation process and the key elements in transforming a story from one medium to another.<\/p>\n

The story of Noah, as it written in the Bible<\/em>, is episodic. One action simply follows another. Instructed by God, Noah has a goal.\u00a0 He sets about accomplishing that goal in a straightforward sequence of events.<\/p>\n

There is lots of external conflict in Noah\u2019s Bible<\/em> story: the rigors of building the ark, gathering the animals, the danger presented by the rising flood waters, and the endless days of floating across a vast watery world not knowing where or when they would land. But the Biblical text provides very few relationship conflicts and Noah has no personal internal conflict.\u00a0 Much is missing or omitted from the original text that needs to be present in a successful fictional story.<\/p>\n

Scripts fail when the protagonist only struggles with external obstacles.\u00a0 Our internal struggles and contradictions define what we do and what we do defines who we are.\u00a0 Character is action. \u00a0A character\u2019s internal conflict drives the character\u2019s actions in response to any and all external conflicts. Resolving that inner conflict is what creates a character\u2019s emotional or spiritual journey.\u00a0 No inner conflict no journey. As written in the Bible<\/em>, Noah has no conflicted interior life. He simply proceeds on his mission step-by-step.<\/p>\n

Among the Nine Character Types, Noah is Power of Conscience character. Power of Conscience characters are propelled to act out of an innate sense of duty, responsibility, and righteousness.\u00a0 Noah is specifically described as \u201ca righteous man, blameless among the people of his time, one who walked faithfully with God\u201d.<\/p>\n

Power of Conscience characters feel responsible for the greater good and for doing good. Internally, they wrestle with how far they should go in seeking justice or how much wrong should they do in the cause of right. They struggle with what is the higher duty. Is the precise letter of the law more important than the more generous spirit of the law? Which should prevail: justice or mercy? Is punishment or forgiveness the more righteous choice? What does the higher duty call them to do? \u00a0Please note: SPOILERS AHEAD if you haven’t seen the movie yet.<\/p>\n

Power of Conscience characters fear failing in their own eyes or in not living up to their own high moral standards. They fret over how far they should go in promoting their deeply held personal beliefs or acting on their moral outrage.<\/p>\n

Some of the best adaptations start with a question. \u00a0I don’t know him personally but I believe Aronofsky started by asking himself why, after fulfilling his mission, does Noah drink himself into near insensibility, to the point he doesn\u2019t bother to dress himself. Aronofsky\u2019s answer seems to be\u2014 because Noah thinks he has failed.<\/p>\n

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In order to strengthen Noah\u2019s position, Aronofsky doesn\u2019t include Noah\u2019s son\u2019s wives in his retelling of the story. Only one son, Shem, has a wife, Ila, but she is barren.\u00a0 When a miracle occurs and Ila conceives, Noah believes the child must be killed (sacrificed to God) if the baby is a female (and capable of reproducing).<\/p>\n

Noah\u2019s wife, Naameh, argues for mercy. Noah is adamant about his interpretation of his mission. After Ila gives birth to twin girls, Noah remains convinced about what he must do. He burns the raft Shem and Ila build to escape.\u00a0 Ila runs back into the Ark.\u00a0 When Noah finds her, knife in hand, she begs to be allowed to comfort the children so they won\u2019t die afraid.\u00a0 She sings a lullaby that Noah sang to her.\u00a0 When the babies quiet, Noah cannot kill them in their innocent slumber. At the expense of his mission, Noah saves the babies.\u00a0 Noah believes he has failed.<\/p>\n

Ila comes to him in his depression and tells him that human compassion, mercy, and kindness are the most important virtues.\u00a0 It is impossible to fail God if you hold these things in your heart and you act for the good of another.\u00a0 Ila suggests that it is God\u2019s will that Noah discover mercy in contrast to the harsh justice he has witnessed.<\/p>\n

Noah is an Old Testament story brought into the New Testament.\u00a0 What Ila tells Noah reminds me of what Jesus tells the Pharasees when he heals a man on the Sabbath.<\/p>\n

Matthew 12:11\u2014 \u201cAnd a man was there whose hand was withered. And they questioned Jesus, asking, “Is it lawful to heal on the Sabbath?”– so that they might accuse Him. And He said to them, “What man is there among you who has a sheep, and if it falls into a pit on the Sabbath, will he not take hold of it and lift it out? How much more valuable then is a man than a sheep! So then, it is lawful to do good on the Sabbath.\u201d<\/p>\n

The letter of the law says it is forbidden to work on the Sabbath.\u00a0 The spirit of New Testament teaching is that compassion, mercy, and kindness toward others are more important than Sabbath law or any other law. For the sake of compassion and generosity, Jesus ignored laws of ritual washing, laws forbidding association with women and those who were unclean, and dietary laws. \u00a0Over and over in the Bible<\/em>, Jesus chooses mercy.<\/p>\n

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Javert hunts Jean Valjean for decades.\u00a0 Javert\u2019s duty is to strictly enforce the law and to return all escaped convicts to prison.<\/p>\n

Jean Valjean has the opportunity to kill Javert, and end the chase, but Jean Valjean spares Javert\u2019s life instead. \u00a0Javert realizes his quarry is a good man.\u00a0 Javert lets Jean Valjean go.<\/p>\n

But Javert cannot live in a world where mercy might be morally superior to the letter of the law.\u00a0 Javert kills himself because he cannot live with this contradiction of his rigid belief in his duty as a \u201cman of law\u201d.<\/p>\n

Noah struggles with the same kind of contradiction. What is the higher duty?\u00a0 Should we promote justice or extend mercy? How far are we willing to go in doing what we believe is right? How far is too far? These internal conflicts are at the heart of Aronofsky\u2019s adaptation of the the Noah story.\u00a0 They are the essential conflicts that make this brief episodic Bible<\/em> story work as a movie.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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