{"id":7646,"date":"2017-09-14T07:00:53","date_gmt":"2017-09-14T07:00:53","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/etbscreenwriting.com\/\/?p=7646"},"modified":"2021-07-30T22:47:13","modified_gmt":"2021-07-30T22:47:13","slug":"coincidence-top-of-lake-china-girl","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/etbscreenwriting.com\/coincidence-top-of-lake-china-girl\/","title":{"rendered":"Coincidence Tanks Top of the Lake: China Girl"},"content":{"rendered":"

Thinkpiece Thursday<\/h2>\n

Despite strong performances all around, the sequel to Top of the Lake\u00a0<\/em>disappoints because of the ridiculous contrived coincidences powering its plot.<\/p>\n

## SPOILER ALERT ##<\/strong><\/p>\n

\"\"<\/a>Teenaged Mary,\u00a0(Alice Englert)\u00a0<\/span>is the long lost daughter given up for adoption by Robin (Elizabeth Moss) the cop investigating the “China Girl” murder. \u00a0Mary just happens to be sexually and romantically involved with the killer, nicknamed “Puss” (David Dencik).<\/p>\n

The brothel Puss helps run, where “China Girl” worked, is also an illegal surrogate “farm”. \u00a0It caters to Australians so desperate to have a baby they don’t really check the girls’ backgrounds.<\/p>\n

The supervising cop on the investigation just happens to have used one of the brothel girls as a surrogate for the child his mistress wants to have. \u00a0He KNOWS his surrogate is a prostitute because he has frequented the place.<\/p>\n

His mistress,\u00a0Miranda (Gwendoline Christie) just happens to be Robin’s partner on the police force investigating the China Girl murder.<\/p>\n

This is too much coincidence to sustain credibility.<\/p>\n

When is coincidence a good thing? \u00a0K.M. Weiland<\/a> describes it beautifully:<\/p>\n

\"Coincidences

“At some point in almost every story, there is going to be something coincidental that kicks off the plot. What is it that first brings the protagonist and antagonist into opposition? Often, it\u2019s a coincidence:<\/p>\n